Tuesday, April 29, 2014

Narrative - The Charlie Show

The Charlie Show from Rusty Holse on Vimeo.

Charlie Wigglebottoms offers relationship advice to Billie and LaFanda.

15 comments:

  1. That was GREAT!!! You guys did an awesome job acting, hilarious script, and great editing!!!!

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  2. That was hilarious! I love the placement of the guests as they refer to them before they step out on stage. I love the beginning with the shots of the crowd clapping it all worked really well.

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  3. Ha Ha Ha Ha. Nice work guys! I think Lafonda did a great job. I loved how you flashed the backstage while the dialogue was going on but I wish we could have seen more of it!

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  4. That was ridiculous, very funny. Your actors did a great job and I liked your scenes introducing the show along with the split scenes. The music was too loud at times and I couldn't hear Charlie.

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  5. I have sick fantasies. . .

    That was great. Good job editing. I think the shots of the characters backstage could have been a little longer and some of the dialogue was a little quiet at times but other that that, it was absolutely hysterical. Fantastic job.

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  6. The puppet "performed" well and the continuity of it works. The hard rock made it very funny as did pretty much everything else. Only issue was the puppet wasn't loud enough. And sometimes when the hard rock played you couldn't hear the people talking. Other than that, it was hilarious!

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  7. That was hilarious! Really great job of showing the guests in the corner of the screen just before they came out on stage. I thought the strobe lighting at the end really worked well too! Great video!

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  8. "You know I want some pancakes, chyea chyea chyea chyea"

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  9. I liked the cuts to the audience. It really felt like we were watching a talk show. The shots with the people back stage getting ready to come out was my favorite. Hilarious because that's so realistic to what people really do on the Jerry Springer show.

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  10. I don't think we were prepared for that... It was hilarious, but it only made sense because we've heard the story already. Where'd the monkey come from? either way, it was shot pretty well and the cast was absolutely funny. Awesome!

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  11. The idea was very interesting. Your choice of the host was successful as well. Great puppeteer work! I would only wish you had more light during shooting.

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  12. Really funny narrative guys :) Great job. The main problems I see is that the music was too strong and the voices were hard to hear half the time. Also, the white flashes with the scene with the new boyfriend seem rather unnatural to me, and it did not transition to well. Fabulous job nonetheless.

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  13. You went for humor and man did you get it that was hilarious! I especially like the puppet work and the slow down at the start with it being black and white and sort of flashy mixed with the roaring audience set the tone really well. My only complaint was that the audio got a bit to loud at times I couldn't hear what was going on though I think in some scenes that overpowering audio worked.

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  14. I thought everything was pretty good. I liked how you incorporated the crowd and the sounds of the crowd when they weren't showing. The audio could have been a little better at the beginning. Another part I liked were the preview clips at the beginning before everyone was coming out like a real show and the video clips in the corner before the people were brought out.

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